Log in

No account? Create an account
10 February 2010 @ 01:58 pm
KHR Doujin - Tsuna/Millefiore - Manifestation of Madness ***Part2  

Thank you so much for all of you who visited and commented, new faces and old faces. Every single one of you! I am surprised that people read this kind of thing more than yaoi (as how I see it). I was a little afraid at first to receive any negative comments (on the other hand, I think I might find it amusing to get something like ‘you need help’) I guess this is pretty normal here though. We all need to vent our frustration >.<!

Here’s the rest:

After the death of Bluebell (if anyone doesn’t remember reading Daisy and Bluebell’s parts, they’re in earlier entry, I’ve added pages.):


25/ a really wrong choice of landing.
























33/ when I was reading Ash’s fic on first time, I thought Byakuran would work his way out of this, turned out that he only fuel Tsuna’s wrath.



34/ as to how Byakuran couldn’t move, I really recommend you read Ash’s fic. I can’t draw all of that myself ^^”
























42/ this is one of my piece too. i just like this KHR ending. With Hibari's back facing Tsuna's pov, nevertheless he's there.



43/ it’s not specify in fic if Tsuna cried or not but I really couldn’t help it. I’d rather make this story ends in sadness instead of madness or I myself would have gone nuts!





Some story board of this doujin, I found it silly ^^” and yes, that’s how I really drew the hearts in storyboard.



I’ve got to admit I’m not really fired up when it came near the end, that’s why some pages are roughly done otherwise I wouldn’t be able to finish it anytime soon. I hope it’s not too bad. Tell me what you think!

Thanks again for your interest and Special thanks again to Ashinan who allowed me to draw this out of her fanfiction.

Current Music: Silent Hill 4 - Room of Angel
Lily the Radish Witch!radish_lily on February 10th, 2010 10:12 am (UTC)

I... I got chills. I really did. Especially at the end of it all, with the tears and the empty eyes and that chilling last line of Tsuna's. H-holy cheese and crackers.

Excellent job.
yamamotokun80yamamotokun80 on February 10th, 2010 11:03 am (UTC)
wow... the illustrations are awesome....
i love it to the extreme!
naynaenanaynaena on February 10th, 2010 11:51 am (UTC)


bonbonpichkurobon on February 17th, 2010 05:06 am (UTC)
27100 sm ละมั้ง ฮะๆ มีคนว่ามางี้ แหะๆ
ได้ค่ะ ไทยปะกิดอ่านได้ อย่างอื่นยู้เยื่อง
LuiseMeyrinkligust_dactna on February 10th, 2010 02:55 pm (UTC)
This is fantastic! XD
q3apo: byakuranxshouichiq3apo on February 10th, 2010 04:24 pm (UTC)
hikz.... is so sad....
   blas·phe·mous™: khr • left right leftmychemical_lust on February 10th, 2010 06:51 pm (UTC)

Wow, the ending is so sad! And your art makes its sadder. In a good way though! I don't want that comment to sound like a bad thing! You totally portrayed the emotions the story fluently through your art!
bonbonpichkurobon on February 17th, 2010 05:08 am (UTC)
ha ha, i'll take that as a compliment then ^^ thank you! the original fic by Ashinan portrays it perfectly through her writing style, i must have been influcenced by it too.
demoerin: cranky jackass faces &heartdemoerin on February 10th, 2010 07:12 pm (UTC)
I did not expect that ending. Perhaps I should've, but anyway, OUCH.

Some of your expressions for Tsuna (the first page) are really, really nice. Most of his poses are great - they feel tensed for action. Pg 31 where he's crouched like a cat is my favourite.
bonbonpichkurobon on February 17th, 2010 05:11 am (UTC)
thank you for bringing that up^^ i worked the hardest on this doujin when it comes to KHR doujin. my thought exactly! when i read Ashinan's original fic i didn't expect that ending too...and oh, yup, perhaps i should've!
Fire child: [Final Fantasy X] Yunateruame on February 10th, 2010 08:08 pm (UTC)
Wow...just...wow. *__* So beautifully sad...

You did the perfect ending for all of this. Just so damn perfect, to the point where I'm now envying you for your storytelling skills. :-D
bonbonpichkurobon on February 17th, 2010 05:13 am (UTC)
ah no no. the story is not my own, it's Ashinan's. i'm just an illustrator for her fanfiction ^^ save for 3 pages that are my own ideas. but thanks anyway!
Christy: reborn: ryohei & kyoko sasagawarinhail on February 11th, 2010 12:29 am (UTC)
I feel so bad for Tsunayoshi. I hope the end fight between Byakuran and Tsunayoshi doesn't actually end up this way; that'd be too hard.

Again, you did an excellent job! Loved it. :D
bonbonpichkurobon on February 17th, 2010 05:16 am (UTC)
well, we can always go to the good ending from the original manga ^_^
suzaku18 on February 11th, 2010 08:27 am (UTC)

;w; I salute you for managing to finish that, truly.
I also agree with having Tsuna cry at the end; it adds more pain to the tragic fic this was based on.

So adding on my Memories. <33333

Again, thank you so much for sharing this with us!
bonbonpichkurobon on February 17th, 2010 05:15 am (UTC)
oh thanks for agreeing with me. ^^
after i've finished this, i died too :P now reborn for more!
suzaku18 on February 17th, 2010 11:52 am (UTC)
I love that! xD
Angelaine Prisscillaeangehibari on February 11th, 2010 12:14 pm (UTC)
Nice! I love the end! XD
crimson_flyerscrimson_flyers on February 11th, 2010 11:02 pm (UTC)
this story is really amazingXD I really love it!!
mxsoul on February 17th, 2010 05:32 pm (UTC)
(Anonymous) on February 20th, 2010 08:29 pm (UTC)
nice i rely liked it!!
Doggie: Saddoggiedynasty on February 26th, 2010 08:18 am (UTC)
:( Wow
Ashinan: Tsuna!musicashinan on May 11th, 2010 03:18 am (UTC)
Hello, my dear, just thought I would drop by and wander through the wonder that was your manga adaptation again. It's still beautiful and I still love it like crazy.

And I just wanted to let you know that I've posted the story to my livejournal, so if you wanna read it again? It's there!

Ugh, I love how you made Tsuna cry at the end. So beautiful!
mangaromancemangaromance on January 14th, 2012 04:21 am (UTC)
Insanity killed Tsuna but helped revenge his dead friends...so sad! T-T
You did great in showing the emotions. I laughed at your story board I was thinking how cute the scene would have been if you left the hearts like that. Hahahaha.